“…delight and torment girls.”

Ok, one more from The Manic Mission by CJ Simone. I’m a slightly nerdy white guy, and I rarely delighted or tormented girls . . . but we all knew the knuckleheads that did. Handsome, talented, and sometimes cocky or just a fool. And yet, we nerds thought, it might be nice delight and torment girls some day.

It’s why this line jumped out to me. Love it. Lived it.

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ALEXANDRIA ON MAIN adds Suddenly Rural Girl to their shelves!

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Suddenly Rural Girl is now available in Soldotna, Alaska! Thanks River City Books!

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in Denver, Colorado!

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“Wrecking balls got no choice…”

I’m a sucker for a good metaphor, too. This character believes he’s destined to destroy, no matter what his intent. He does everything he can to help others, but damage is what is left behind. CJ Simone infuses a few of these concise metaphors throughout The Manic Mission.

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SRG is now available in Council Grove, Kansas at Flint Hills Books!

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Some SRG Characters & Marketing Images

When I write, I always Googled for images of locations and people who I think resemble my characters. Then I print those images and stick them on a HUGE cork board as a reference during the process. (Curious if anyone else writes this way?) I did the same for Suddenly Rural Girl, our Christian YA novel. This time, when we finished the writing, I tried my had at some of that AI image generation (Midjourney, Dall-E, Firefly, etc.) to create images of the characters. (I used absolutely no AI in the novel writing process–though I’ve researched it thoroughly for work–I’ll share more about it at the end of this post.) Creating the AI generated images afterwards was FUN for this book, and they turned into some great marketing images. I’ll share a few below along with brief descriptions of the characters.

Dak Moore is our protagonist, and Suddenly Rural Girl is written in first person. Her are a couple things she says about herself in the book.

“My hair has always been long and dark brown. Cocoa with a touch of cherry–probably from my dad’s Irish side…Today, I wore two French braids with a part down the middle. Symmetrical, except the daisies on one leg of my overalls offset things just enough.”

and

“I got this,” I said, turning away from Liam’s hand and stepping toward the edge. If a girl’s gonna make something of herself, she can’t do it holding hands with some boy–no matter how cute he is.”

George Washington Young is the wise old neighbor, who happens to be a blind . . . and a horse owner. Here’s what Dak says about him:

“He pulled his hands away, and his eyes showed more kindness than I’ve seen in most folks with perfect vision…Mr. Young and I were two people separated by a gravel road and eighty years, and I could have at least told him how much a lost and lonely girl from Michigan appreciated his kindness, his unlikely friendship.”

and

“Some folks didn’t like them Bashkir Curly’s on account of how they look a little different,” Mr. Young answered. “Let’s keep prayin’ folks quit judgin’ things by how they look.”

Ms. Bousta may be my favorite character. Here’s what Dak noticed:

“She was an outgoing and outstanding woman, full-figured and full of bubbly energy with a wardrobe to match. She’s hard to miss, like an enormous used car dealer billboard along the highway…but you’ve never seen a heftier woman move with more grace. Her pink, floral tunic hung down to mid-thigh and floated behind her. She was light of foot, carried herself with poise…and came toward me with surprising speed.”

and

At that moment, she somehow tucked her head and left arm like a gymnast doing a roll, so that she curled onto her shoulders, flinging her legs over her head and into a rotation like some helicopter move you’d see in a breakdancing movie.

“Whooo!” Ms. Bousta exclaimed after a shaky breath. “I haven’t done that one in a while.”

Jackson is the story’s mystery character. An outcast with a life-changing secret. Here’s how Dak introduces him to us:

Jackson stepped out like a shadow. He was as dirty and disheveled as ever, standing silently with his palms up helplessly, but he displayed neither shock nor fear.

The last image I’ll share in this post (though there are lots more) was an A-Frame house tucked into the woods. Dak’s suddenly new home in Suddenly Rural Girl.

You can see lots more characters if you visit http://www.dannhurlbert (dot) com/suddenly-rural-girl.

And, if you’re interested in learning how to do some AI filmmaking (scripting, storyboarding, image generation, etc.) I whipped up a short tutorial course, which is available at http://www.carleton (dot) edu/its/blog/ai-filmmaking-with-dann

PS: Thanks to everyone in this group who has read or may be reading Suddenly Rural Girl! You are a blessing!

“Call me Eddie, if . . .”

We’re hurling toward death. Tension is high. Eddie remains calm, cool and collected. He’s comfortable with potential disaster, and he offers some of that calm to his fellow travelers. “Call me Eddie, if it will help you relax.” Absurdity and dry humor is alive and well in Hitchhiker’s Guide to the Galaxy.

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Red Fern Booksellers in Salina, Kansas is now carrying Suddenly Rural Girl!

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I wish I had a daughter, so …”

The Marx Brothers were masters at subtle and belittling humor. Often the recipients didn’t know they had been verbally assaulted. Here are a few examples:

Douglas Adams does pretty well with that style of humor, too. This line, “I wish I had a daughter so I could forbid her to marry him” slips in quietly, but is a beautiful slam. (Yes, and you know who you are, we know we’re now in the 21st and a half century with Duck Dodgers, and a father ought not forbid is daughter from marriage, but in context, humor lives on.) Hitchhikers has a number of these fun and subtle zingers.

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Forced Poetry Appreciation

Having read my share of bad poetry . . . I did laugh at this one. Imagining torture in the form of Poetry Appreciation, and tying the participants to their chairs is brilliant. Every junior high kid in a lit class has felt like those prisoners.

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Suddenly Rural Girl has a heart as big as TEXAS . . . and is now available at Bookhound Haven in Texarkana!

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