“…hawk-faced woman” from Parable of the Sower, by Octavia E. Butler

I’m a mix of Scandinavian, German, English, Irish, and South Dakotan:). Somehow my skin color turned out somewhere between peach, tan, and white, but I’m so much more than my skin color; so are you. I don’t want to be characterized by my skin color; neither do you. Yet those obsessed with race and skin color will do what Butler’s protagonist did: identify someone by their skin color first.

Butler’s following description tells us so much more. She was wiry and “all planes and angles.” That subsequent description is fantastic, and it tells us so much more about the human being. The character is malnourished, but with a strong and determined “hawk face.” Eventually we get to know these characters . . . but let’s start by looking deeper. As Morgan Freeman said, “I am going to stop calling you a white man and I’m going to ask you to stop calling me a black man.”

As authors, let’s stop describing our characters that way, too.

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Dann is an educator, Media & Design Guru, Author, and Public Speaker. He currently serves as Media and Design Specialist at an impressive little Midwestern College where he works directly with faculty to develop effective instructional videos. He has an MFA in Digital Cinema from California's National University, a BSED in English and Theatre Education from the University of South Dakota, and a certificate in Online Education from UW Stout. He was founder and principle owner of Little Prompter, LLC, a teleprompter design and manufacturing company until he sold the company in 2020. Prior to joining Carleton's staff, he taught communication, theatre, and video production for approximately 15 years while working as a professional actor and director--appearing in over forty national and regional commercials and directing and editing dozens of videos and musicals. Dann’s MFA thesis project involved writing and directing an original, full-length musical, filming the entire development and production process, and editing it into an educational DVD entitled How to Write and Produce Your Own High School Musical. His DVD is currently being distributed by Films Media Group. His debut YA Christian Fiction novel, Suddenly Rural Girl, is published through Kirk House Publishing.

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