“… as small as a comma” from The Nightingale, by Kristin Hannah

Authors often use literary references in their writing. This one was particularly impressive. War. A fiery explosion. A distant parachute. And the most significant thing . . . was a tiny, suspended, comma. Our protagonist was determined to risk her life, just to save that little thing.

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“Soft foods.” from The Nightingale, by Kristin Hannah

Soups and puddings illicit often thoughts of comfort foods. The addition of “soft foods” takes this in an entirely new direction. Suddenly we’re thinking those that can’t chew. Again, Hannah teases us with a feeling we know and enjoy . . . and then she spins it, so we have lost something.

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“Ichabod Crane…” from Boys Life, by Robert McCammon (5)

Can you use characters from one story to describe a character in your own? I think so, if you anticipate that most of your audience can use your reference to infer those characteristics. For me, who was terrified by the Legend of Sleepy Hollow, it worked beautifully.

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“Dad looked old” from Parable of the Sower, by Octavia E. Butler

Death and destruction dominate Parable of the Sower. I didn’t love the read, but there are always a few lines that jog a memory. Discovering that our parents are old for the first time is, for many, memorable experience. Butler captured that moment here and well.

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“…as if she’d run out of trust.” from Boys Life, by Robert McCammon (4)

As long as there are novels, there will be antagonists. A challenge is uncovering why the character has become mean, vindictive, or just or just downright evil. This short sentence gives tremendous insight…while letting the reader’s imagination run wild.

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“As weak as meatless broth…” from The Nightingale, by Kristin Hannah

Hannah’s description of dawn, often used to signify optimism or a bright new day, sets the scene well. The comparison of sunrise to meatless broth also reinforces howthe meals have been for these characters. Another great simile.

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“as sweet and bitter as…” from The Nightingale, by Kristin Hannah

Another one from the Nightingale: Unlike burned popcorn, there is still something sweet and savory about burned caramel. It’s both delicious and damaged. It makes you wonder if Isabelle was conflicted. Did she truly think it was terrible . . . or was there still something she enjoyed about the situation?

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“Fork in an electric socket…” from Boys Life, by Robert McCammon (3)

Describing feelings is a challenge. How can you capture surprise or fear or shock without writing “I was shocked!” This short description is great. We’ve all been zapped.

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“The park was named for Clifford…” from Boys Life, by Robert McCammon (2)

The teenage boy in me chuckled at this one. Gotta love the dads and authors who aren’t afraid to make a bodily function joke from time to time.

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“…like a viper in the reeds” from The Nightingale, by Kristin Hannah

In realistic fiction, we don’t actually imagine the woman slithering on her belly, but Hannah’s quick description immediately describes the kind of character we’re facing. I love those descriptive lines.

“The woman moved like a viper in the reeds.”

Kristin Hannah, The Nightingale

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March is “National Reading Month,” and you can celebrate with Suddenly Rural Girl, a new YA and Christian Fiction novel!

The Suddenly Rural Girl book trailer, featuring the voice of Kennedy Hurlbert, co-author.

March is a great month to start a new adventure, and because it’s still chilly outside–you can do it while reading a book! Order your copy of Suddenly Rural Girl by visiting our shop!

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“We start out knowing magic…” from Boys Life, by Robert McCammon (1)

This passage sets the stage for a wild and imaginative ride through a small town called Zephyr, Alabama in the 1960s.

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