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“…even though your head is shaped like an anvil…”

This was a fantastic back-handed compliment that uses both exaggeration and incongruity to get the laugh. Initially it’s hopeful. If delivered by an attractive and “ditsy blonde” character–it might actually be intended as a compliment. The dim-witted recipient might also believe it was a compliment. For the reader (of higher intelligence) we see the unintended, though creative, slam. Beyond the exaggeration (enough brut to kill small birds) and incongruity (shaped like an anvil), there’s a third laugh waiting. When the “attractive man” realizes it’s not a compliment, we’re treated to his recognition. I imagine one eyebrow lifting or both drawing downward and together while he thinks “Waaaaiiit a minute.”

This is a smartly written and funny sentence. Loved it!

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