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“A breeze would have been louder.” from The Red Texts Club, by Andrea VanRyken

“Barely audible” is an adequate description. I enjoyed that VanRyken took it one step further, because I immediately understood how quiet a breeze is, and how nearly-silent the whisper was. A good and effective description.

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